「ぼくだけの場所」
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「ぼくだけの場所」詞・曲 by らくさ
この坂を上ったら
ぼくが好きな街が見える
今日のうちに あなたを連れて行こう
もうすぐだ あなたに見せたい空がある
この屋根が途切れて 広がる場所へ
歩きにくい道でごめん
だから ぼくだけの場所なんだ
知ってほしいと願う気持ち
ぼくが先に行くよ
ここは ぼくだけの場所なんだ
あなたは何を見てくれるかな
振り返ってみて
ぼくが好きな街が見える
軽く息を切らせて あなたが手を広げた
少年の頃 泣きながらここに来た
夕暮れ照らす泣き顔 ありきたりな若さ
(そんな ぼくがいた 場所…)
なんてことない街だけど
ここが ぼくだけの場所なんだ
雲間から光おりてくる
(※)空の色変わる
いまも ぼくだけの場所なんだ
あなたは何を見てくれるかな
歩きにくい道でごめん
だからぼくだけの場所なんだ
感じてほしいと願う気持ち
(※)repeat
歩きにくい道でごめん
だからぼくだけの場所なんだ
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- 日時:01:58
comments
「歩きにくい」というのが、ぼくだけの場所という感じにつながるね、というコメントをいただきました。
歩きにくい道だけど、「ぼく」は「あなた」の手を引くこともないし、むしろ先に歩いて行っちゃいます。この2人の関係を考えてみるもよし。
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